Monday 16 March 2009

A Revolutionary War Poem - by Asher

The vultures come out at the break of dawn,
To see what these men have come upon.
Whiz! Bang! The sound of thunder.
Flaming bullets come sailing under.
General Washington leads his men,
On to victory - now and then.

3 comments:

Beee said...

WOW! Great poem!

Grandma said...

That was fun to read. You are a very creative young man. Love, Grandma Liz

Anonymous said...

That is a really good poem.

Lisa